yeh This is a track tentatively titled 'Damien'....its part of a collab so its only two sixteens. constructive criticism would be much appreciated. I'm a lil offbeat in someplaces i know that, but i was recording on three hours of interrupted sleep so you'll have to forgive me.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/inquisitionukmusic.htm

checked and did some crit on other ppl's stuff......

Manz got some good lyics on there.

Bro i like your unique concepts. You do it in writing and audio which is ultimately hot!Im at an office and for some reason tunes sound normal but vocals sound bit dodgy but i like what i hear. Hope to hear more from you. keep it up

you mean the actual sound of the vocals sound dodgy or the sound quality of them are dodgy-cos i dont particularly like my delivery, lol but i gotta live with it. is my voice wack basically?

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to be real with you..i wasnt really feelin it..

u can obviously spit and probley drop shit that i will feel in the future though.

have you lived in lodnon all your life? for some reason when i first heard it i thought you was defenitly from outta london..then i saw ur loctation lol.

^no. i don't mind if you weren't feeling it man, I put it up for critique innit! But what weren't u feeling, the lyrics, delivery, beat or everything? Its jus good as feedback for the future.

ahh i thought so...

hmm i think it was basicly the delivery..beat an lyrics was cool.

seen. I fucking hate my delivery anyway! yeah I have lived in London all my life, but I dropped by voice lower than I usually speak cos I sound even worse if I spit how I talk. Fuck it, I'll work something out.

Yo Inquisition you got any other audio with you on it?

yeh agree with what sin said kind of...beat was nice too..

dont think your vioce is that bad at all man...lik u said it a littl eoff beat in parts but u can easily sort that out...

Yea i have that same problem with my voice...i dnt like the way i sound at all but i dont like to change my voice drastically cuz that would be fucking pants...if i sound wack..i sound wack

yeah get some more up bro quick ting lets have a sniff im enjoyin that still...

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yeh thanks for the look bro, appreciate it. I kno what you're sayin about not wanting to drastically change but the way i see it is that i'll try and change my voice to whatever sounds best as long as im not coming without a British accent, thats all.

in reply to Wez yeh i do have more audio but its gonna be recorded within the next month.